Terrific Pen, Cody,
I agree with Mark, you are being a "Bit Hard on Yourself".
I think The blank is Excellent, I rather like the angled Blue Line.
The Police Force, as with most things in Life is not always "Straight Forward".
As such they have to accommodate situations, "Off the Beaten Track'.
Therefore the "Off Set Line" is most appropriate.
Excellent choice of Pen to display your Blank.
Terrific Fit and Finish,
A Superb Tribute.
Congratulations,
Brian.