You will never get a true feel for a finish through any photo. So you will have to be your own judge and jury. Most photos when shown all we can do is look at a shine and if people see the famous line they say it looks great but we really can not tell. Unless you do a super macro of the blank then we can see more detail. If you are happy then that is all that counts. If you want someone else to look at it then find a pen turner close to you or send them the pen. Sorry but them is the facts.
On a note other than the finish it looks like the blank is still proud of the nib and center portion. Hey you asked.