Hi,
Here are some very humble comments.
Skip the red, red is for warning. Your top banner suggest black or dark gey.
Remove the word HOME at the top left, too close to the home button.
Try to make the text in you banner larger, this is you site name show it [
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You IAP logo is too large, taking too much place, and the dittering makes it look a bit cheap. It should be top right corner or bottom, centered and linked back to the IAP site.
Your photo are mostly ok, but some of them are a bit over exposed in my opinion. The pen just blend with the back groud. They are nice looking pen so put them in value.
On the cigar pen page, the corian pen text say that they are both done in chrome but only one pen in the pic.
Overall, the site looks promissing and you are on a good start.
Hope this comments will help you improve your site.
Alfred