emtmike
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OK Here we go again. I know I still have a ways to go. I want to add the PayPal link. This is just a "how am I doing so far" post. Let me know. http://sitekreator.com/ffmike
another web site try
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vick
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I would avoid having the main text on the home page as red if I were you. Large amounts of red text can be hard to read.
LanceD
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"we turn them in our own shop here in Bucksport Maine then polish them to a glassy finnish."
I think the sentence would sound a little better if it would read "Our pens are turned in our shop in Bucksport, Maine then they are polished to a glass like finish.
I also agree that red is harder to read and maybe go up in font size by 1 or maybe 2 sizes.
And on the About our Pens page.
heaver should be spelled heavier. there should be spelled their and stile should be spelled style
I think the sentence would sound a little better if it would read "Our pens are turned in our shop in Bucksport, Maine then they are polished to a glass like finish.
I also agree that red is harder to read and maybe go up in font size by 1 or maybe 2 sizes.
And on the About our Pens page.
heaver should be spelled heavier. there should be spelled their and stile should be spelled style
Pipes
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Good loken site BUT I like theother one also !! looken good !! Now raise your prices :O))) you do nice work don't give it away just IMHO only :O)
http://affordablepipes.com/
http://affordablepipes.com/
OSCAR15
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Pipes is right, in this humble CIGAR smokers opinion. Raise your prices somewhat. A lot of turners charge way too much. Conversely, you are basically paying for your time, and website without much profit to show.
I typically sell to friends and co-workers, so I can sell at a lower price. I have no web page, overhead etc.....
Webpage looks great! I would go Visa Mastercard though. Myself and others I know have occasionally run into headaches with paypal.
I typically sell to friends and co-workers, so I can sell at a lower price. I have no web page, overhead etc.....
Webpage looks great! I would go Visa Mastercard though. Myself and others I know have occasionally run into headaches with paypal.
arioux
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Hi,
Here are some very humble comments.
Skip the red, red is for warning. Your top banner suggest black or dark gey.
Remove the word HOME at the top left, too close to the home button.
Try to make the text in you banner larger, this is you site name show it [
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You IAP logo is too large, taking too much place, and the dittering makes it look a bit cheap. It should be top right corner or bottom, centered and linked back to the IAP site.
Your photo are mostly ok, but some of them are a bit over exposed in my opinion. The pen just blend with the back groud. They are nice looking pen so put them in value.
On the cigar pen page, the corian pen text say that they are both done in chrome but only one pen in the pic.
Overall, the site looks promissing and you are on a good start.
Hope this comments will help you improve your site.
Alfred
Here are some very humble comments.
Skip the red, red is for warning. Your top banner suggest black or dark gey.
Remove the word HOME at the top left, too close to the home button.
Try to make the text in you banner larger, this is you site name show it [
]You IAP logo is too large, taking too much place, and the dittering makes it look a bit cheap. It should be top right corner or bottom, centered and linked back to the IAP site.
Your photo are mostly ok, but some of them are a bit over exposed in my opinion. The pen just blend with the back groud. They are nice looking pen so put them in value.
On the cigar pen page, the corian pen text say that they are both done in chrome but only one pen in the pic.
Overall, the site looks promissing and you are on a good start.
Hope this comments will help you improve your site.
Alfred
emtmike
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good idea Ron can I move it myself?
Moved to Casual Conversation...
You've also changed the aspect ratio of the IAP logo. You have dimension properties on the image tag. If you have width properties on the table columns, remove them.
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