NOte the clarity and definition of another pen posted on SOYP.
I selected this at random.
It is NOT my work but that of a recently rgeistered member
It actually looks like a photograph of a pen.The "borders of the pen are clean and crisp with definition.You can see the actual edges of the pen.
In the picture I can see with clarity great detail.
I am not a photographerbut I do know when I present a pen to be seen on this forum I want to show as much clarity and definition as I can.
How could anyone comment on the fit and finish if you cannot determine where the pen ends and the background starts?
Your fittings are "outlined"in white or grey. I am not saying in any way you intentionally put them there but that is what I see on my monitor.
Your pictures have an "artsy appearance" that some may appreciate but certainly not a realistisc one as presented in the picture I posted above.
That is something I do not see in your posted picture