Looks like a decent draft so far. Fix the spelling/grammar issues the others have pointed out and don't be afraid to experiment with the overall look. Try different fonts, colors, backgrounds. That's what makes the design process fun.
One thing I might point out: consider reducing the file size of your photos. Some of those are several hundred kb in size, which may cause your site to load very slowly for visitors with dial-up access. If your site takes 30 seconds to load, that gives the visitor 30 seconds to think about bailing. You don't want to scare off potential customers. There are some free image utilities out there that you can use to resize photos, such as Irfanview.
http://www.irfanview.com/
Part of why your photos appear fuzzy may be due to you fitting a large image into a small frame or table. The visitor's browser ends up compressing the image to fit the frame, causing it to lose some of its quality. If the website image frame is defined as say, 240 by 320 pixels, resize or crop your photo to those dimensions. The photos shouldn't be more than about 20k-50k or so. If you plan to place numerous images on one page, consider shrinking them to thumbnails, typically about 120 x 160 pixels. You can always link a full-size image to launch when a user clicks the thumbnail.
Web design is kind of a work in progress, and you will find yourself tweaking things a lot.
Cheers.