All of the "white" and ring scratches to me indicate that you are being too aggressive and using more of a dull tool than you know. A skew, as JohnT and others say would eliminate that. I am not good with the skew, but use a "slightly" rounded scraper, and still get very very smooth cuts on acrylic and wood, even if roughing it down. "Rough" on already round blanks is indicative of either dull tools or too aggressive, or both.
Off Topic but relevant: I used to be good at basic woodworking and making things, but spent very little time on the finish. And I saw / see much of this mindset among some peers. We easily spend 40 hours making something and 2 - 3 hours on the finish. It took me a while to learn that I needed to spend almost as much time on the finishing as the making. That improved my projects' look and value by multiple fold.
That example relates to pen making in the "sharpening" aspect - more that one might think. One can tell the sharpness of a tool by looking at the turnings. Sharp tools are as important as the lathe. It is easy to understand the desire to do a pen, and another, and another, but at some point, the use of the turning tool catches up with us. I personally "sharpen" my tools about once every 30 to 40 pens, but I swipe it across a .3micron sand paper 3 to 4 times per pen (similar to honing). About every 3 to 4 pens, I swipe the edge of the tool two or three times across 3 or 4 micron SP (forget which exactly) then 1 micron and then .3 micron sandpaper. Tools stay sharp this way.
This is my opinion only: new pen turners should stay away from roughing gouges. They are made to rough in bowl blanks and are too aggressive on something as small as a pen blank - unless one is already an expert/professional in the use of a roughing gouge. In the case of being an expert, they generally can finely turn a pen with a roughing gouge. But for New Turners, it can easily be deceptive, kinda like giving a Porsche to a new driver!
If one is not adapt at sharpening, or does not have the proper tools for sharpening, carbide insert tools is recommended. They do not have to be sharpened (but can be). When streaks begin to show, simply turn the insert. And I would suggest searching on this forum for "inserts". Some, from my reading of different threads, seem to be more finely sharpened than others. They tend to cost More, but sharpness is worth it.