Nice. How about something regarding the spheres in the photo? Turned by you. I was told, if you think your turning tool needs sharpened, you are overdue for sharpening.
Darrin, from what I can see of this pen, looks pretty good. But to really see what it looks like, you should have a plain white or light background. The background you have in this pic, though nice, but to busy and dark to have as a background.