Nice Pen Lee.
Spectacular Blank, Beautifully Finished.
For My Taste I would like to see the Body Profile, reduced closer to the Hardware Dimensions, and so reduce the Slightly Bulbous Profile.
Obviously, you are Technically Competent in Turning, what you now require is Confidence in taking the Blank, down to the Hardware.
This requires Practice, and Experience, perhaps on some Firewood until you are not Hesitant, and feel Confident.
I look forward to critiquing some of your future pens.
Congratulations,
Brian.