David, there is a nice shine on the BOW, and it is always good to see turners experimenting with custom center bands.
However, I don't think the center band shape fits on this particular pen. Also, like many of us have done, you left this pen over contoured. It appears that the clip is non-functional. Pregnant pens just look pregnant, in my opinion. That is the beauty of the site, we all are allowed an opinion. Mine is that the wasp waist belongs on a wasp, not a pen.
FWIW,