The following are My Honest remarks, and my Critique of your presentation.
Thank you Amber for Showing, your First Pens.
I will start the Lower Pen,
A Beautiful Pen,
Excellently Turned, Superb Transition from Blank to Nib Section.
Great Fit and Finish.
Now to the First Three.
These Pens Indicate that you have a Talent for Turning Beads and Coves, perhaps more suited for Lamp Pulls etc.
They have a short Transition from the Over Sized Blank to the Nib Cone and Center Bands. This would be very noticeable to the Touch, and I suggest somewhat uncomfortable to ones fingers.
You have shown Excellent Skills and one Great Pen, with the remainder, you have shown some good Turning, but what we are producing is Pens, Not a Light Pull or an Ornament.
Please take this as it is intended, as my Critique.
My views are not necessarily Universally accepted, but it is a Critque.
I look forward to your response, and to Critique you future Posting.
Congratulations,
Brian.