OKLAHOMAN
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Forgive the finger prints. I'm trying my damnest to get pictures of good quality. All suggestion more than welcome.
Originally posted by avbill
1.) your camera and the subject matter are not parallel. Look at the top of the pen lending to the left line up the camera back parallel to the subject in vertical and horizon alignment. or you can adjust this in photoshop.
2.) the photograph is under exposed by 3/4 of a stop to 1 stop. there is very little detail in the pen body. (blank)
3.) Almost every digital camera today has auto focus and auto exposure. The camera takes in all the light and makes a average exposure from the light area and then the dark areas. The chrome area of the pen does not help the photographer, you, because your exposure is 3/4 stops under -- if you exposed the subject correctly the detail in the chrome area would be over-exposed. Losing the detail in the clip area. A better way of exposing the photograph is by bracketing the shot. Either increase the exposure time or decrease. DO NOT adjust the F-stop. F-stop function has every thing to do with the depth of field of the photograph.
In your photograph, you the pen in focus barely. The back of the top of the pen is starting to lose it sharpness. You can see it by looking at the cloth weave of the background. It goes soft at the back of the pen.
4.) your light pattern is slight a miss look at the two shadows of the top of the pen is showing. you have your rigth side light at about 60 degrees from the camera and is farer away from the subject the pen than the left sided light. which is only 15 to 20 from the camera and closer to the subject. (How do I known this is the inverse square law of light. ) To solve the problem make sure the two lights are equal distance to the subject your light. on the left side is a good distance to the subject it highlights the dark acrylic blank with detail and does not lose the detail in the chrome. It would be better if the light were 4 to 8 inches closer. What is lost is your placement of the right sided light bring it closer the the subject and bring it closer to the camera. At the same time project the beam of the light just in front of the subject. this will increase exposure to the front of the horizon pen body giving you more detail in the blank.
By bringing your lights in closer (distance wise you increase your intensity of light ) altering the automate exposure: increasing better detail in the darker areas of your photograph.
hope this helps you!
Bill Daniels
Originally posted by OKLAHOMAN
Forgive the finger prints. I'm trying my damnest to get pictures of good quality. All suggestion more than welcome.
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