with the advantage of having two of your photos. I can make some comparisons.
First, much improvment over the last photo you posted. the focus is much better but it is still a little fuzzy. auto focus will do that with real close up shots. backing the camera up even a few inches will sometimes help just keep experimenting withthe distance your camera needs you cna always crop out the extra background and leave the picture filled with the pen.
two lights from different angles woudl help get more light under the pen, the shadow is still to dark. if you look at the photo Fangar shared, elevating the pen allowed more light to get under it so you can see shat sort of difference that makes. and to repeat Fangar, you are on the right track. So keep playing around. make very small changes from what you are doing and ou will find other situations that fit your taste.