Nice job!
I made exactly this same pen. I bought a 6 pack of these simply because I keep hearing from women that they wanted something small but elegant. My female custmers dont care for the Diva or Princess.
I am NOT impressed the platings! I have sample pens out with heavy users, but so far it doesn't look promising. The gold model is already showing signs of plating wear after only two weeks.
If this set was made available in TN gold and Rhodium, I'd likely buy these by the hundred. Additionally, since I'm merely wishing, I'd design it with a Parker refill.