Still here and still reading the replies
To Andrews point about the picture, the second one posted looks over exposed and the white actually washes out the pen on my monitor. That being said, if I hold the actual pen up to my montior's representation of the picture, it's pretty true to color. Not saying it's such on her monitor but what I'll probably do is send her pictures of the original and ask her if it looks the same as she remembered it.
I think what she ultimately didn't like was the fact that the figuring in that piece darkened the wood. The initial piece, although from the same tree and in this case ultimately from the same slab was very clear as far as silver maple goes. She lives down in Florida so I can't show it to her in person. As for just finishing it and sending it, because it's being engraved, showing the picture to me was an insurance policy before I had it personalized and unsellable in any other venue.
Lots of good advice and food for thought. I am however going try a second version trying to find as clear of a piece as I can to keep the light look. I'm also going to forgo any portion of the finish that might darken the look (oil before CA). This time I'm also going to let her see it before I assemble so I can keep the kit for another project if we decide that I can't meet her request and we decide to part ways.
I'm willing to give someone a second chance and she has since eased up on her time frame and allowed me the time to try again. But she is also aware that this is the last attempt.
Going forward I think I'll put a non-refundable clause on the deposit of all special orders. No different than what you deal with when you get paint mixed.
Once it's mixed, if it's the wrong color, too bad.