A couple of my creations

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DutchPlatypus

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These are the pens I made (#2 and up)...
Thanks for watching and any constructive feedback you may have.

Best Regards,
Edwin

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OZturner

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Excellent Presentation, of Fountain Pens,
Beautiful Blanks, Nicely Turned, Fitted and Finished.
I would like to see, Closer Up Photographs, of the Pens, and Less of the Prop, or Background, it is difficult to see the fine details that differentiate a "Good" Pen to a "Brilliant" Pen.
Congratulations, Very Nice Work.
Brian.
 

DutchPlatypus

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Excellent Presentation, of Fountain Pens,
Beautiful Blanks, Nicely Turned, Fitted and Finished.
I would like to see, Closer Up Photographs, of the Pens, and Less of the Prop, or Background, it is difficult to see the fine details that differentiate a "Good" Pen to a "Brilliant" Pen.
Congratulations, Very Nice Work.
Brian.



Thank you Brian for your positive feedback and suggested improvements for my photography. I'll definitely take your advice to heart next time.
Edwin


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PenPal

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If you use a neutral background I would be less likely to imagine what is in the wallet or wander around the free space you have created.The pen is the prime object at present minimised in size and placement.

If you experiment making full use of close ups of the pens the impact will be instant. All of the pens are IMHO well constructed and excellent representations on this forum.

Peter.
 
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