2nd modified slimline

[usfwood]

Here is my second modified slimline. The woods are Afzilia and Wenge centerband. Finish is CA and kit is WC Titanium Gold.

Any comments or criticism (you won't hurt my feelings) would be appreciated. I am also working on my picture taking, so comments on that would also be welcome.

Thanks for looking,

 

[JimGo]

Picture needs improvement, as you've pointed out. Try a different background - that will help. Also, be sure you're shooting in macro mode if you're in close, or stand farther away, use a tripod and the timer setting, and zoom in. From what I can tell, the fit and finish look pretty good. I like the CB, especially the accents you put into it. Over all, a very nice pen!

 

[NavyDiver]

I like the center band and the grain of the Afzilia looks outstanding, but your picture doesn't do the pen justice. I agree a different background might help.

 

[JudeA]

I like the cb just wish I could see it better. I use 2 lights/ one on either side or top and side to get rid of shadows/ and a off white to a lite grey background I find that helps.
All in all it is a good looking pen their.