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I fired up the Apple and made this real quick.
I like it as do many people I showed the rough drawing.

Your thoughts??






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I like it. Almost over the top on the frilly stuff, but not quite, which means it's quite nice and respectable. Do I win something? ;-)

Scott.
 
Hi DozerMite,
It's ok, but not great. Anyone just looking at it is not going to have any idea what the flourish is. Also the design just lacks balance. I hope I am not being too presumptuous, but I took the liberty to redesign your logo. You may use it as you wish.
 

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Don, thanks for the effort, but I don't want an actual feather. Those can be found anywhere. I'm going for an image that is recognized as mine and can stand alone...like the Apple image. It is quickly recognized by most.

My design isn't yet finished. I just threw it together as an example to see it on paper, as to say. The image isn't going to be used for just pens...it's going to cover all of what I do. And as I posted in the other thread, the image has nothing to do with pens, it is a symbol of something more meaningful...to me.
 
I like it. My only comment would be that the word "Design" seems to float on its own. It doesn't seem as connected to rest of the log. You need to close up the white space between the top of the word and your flourish.
 
Gary is right about "Design", it feels as though it is falling out of the image. The word actually appears to be drooping on the end. Otherwise I like the over all design.
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Charles
 
My intent was show you balance... to me it does not feel right the way it is.... maybe the flourish is just too big or something... either that or "designs" is too small...

DozerMite said:
Don, thanks for the effort, but I don't want an actual feather. Those can be found anywhere. I'm going for an image that is recognized as mine and can stand alone...like the Apple image. It is quickly recognized by most.

My design isn't yet finished. I just threw it together as an example to see it on paper, as to say. The image isn't going to be used for just pens...it's going to cover all of what I do. And as I posted in the other thread, the image has nothing to do with pens, it is a symbol of something more meaningful...to me.
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Perhaps this one will be liked a little better. Not sure if I'm done yet.
 
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