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[emtmike]

I have made some changes to the color, pic size and best of all price. Am I getting any closer? http://sitekreator.com/ffmike

 

[dubdrvrkev]

Looking good. On the corian pen you refer to it as "they are both done in chrome kits", you might want to have that in a singular reference. Other than the few "It is's" left I think you have something going pretty good. If it were me, I would add a thumbnail image next to the link. Not a big deal now, but when you get more pen types on there it will give a quick reference to the style that someone might be shopping for or entice them to look at something they didn't know they were looking for.

 

[gerryr]

This is a big improvement. I'm not sure about having the IAP logo right at the very top. It almost gives the impression that the site is the IAP, to someone not informed.

 

[Ron in Drums PA]

Are you sure you want me to comment?

 

[thewishman]

You have really improved the site - good work! Just a few spelling and grammar errors to fix and you are ready.

 

[emtmike]

Go ahead Ron. Lets hear it

 

[Ron in Drums PA]

Big Improvement! You are on the right track.

Now...
Are you going to get your own domain name?
Did you consider a paypal shopping cart?