From a photo composition viewpoint, there are issues. The bright "light" becomes the focal point of the photo. It draws your eye away from the pen. The human eye and mind will always go to the light point on a pictures.
The effects are cool and add an atmosphere of sorts, but you have to get rid of the "light".
If and when i would use this type of photo,if ever, it would only be one of an array of photos. Sometimes you have to turn away from the normal things. It is not a coupon photo, one would want to use in promoting your art in today's world. Thanks for looking.. Carl