I don't normally jump out and critique pens, I rather like to think that I vote for my favorite pens by paying for kits, if I'm not buying your pen kits, then there must be something out there that I would rather spend my money on.
I really love the Liberty kits, and I've been looking forward to the slimmer Coyote kits! My clients really like the quality and American made product that McKenzie is putting out, and there really aren't many options for full Stainless Steel pen kits, this is your go to source if it's what you want.
I don't know how I feel about the clip on the Coyote since it was pointed out. I do sort of feel like bend to the end of the clip sticks out a bit, maybe the whole clip feels a little big for the pen.
Looking at the photos of the Coyote and the Liberty, it does appear the bend in the clip is proportionally bigger on the Coyote, as if on the Liberty the tip of the clip is bent out about 1/3 the diameter from the body/blank, on the Coyote, in the photos provided, the bend appears to be bent out some 2/5 to 1/2 the diameter of the body/blank. That might just be the photos though.
The clip on the Desire looks fine, but it's attached to a larger barreled cap, and not on the slim body of the pen itself, so that's not a fair comparison.
I wonder if I would have even judged the clip size had it not been pointed out..... It's not like the bent outward pen clip is an uncommon design element among other pen kits, the Anvil EDC, the Gearshift, some Slimline & Cigar styles, some Sierra kits like the Sierra Diverse all use that design to some extent.
Aesthetics aside, I don't see a problem with the clip design for functionality. It's a clip, it's designed to attach to a pocket, or other fabric, or thin material. Pens like this don't belong loose inside your pocket, that's one of the main features of the clip. The fact that it bends away from the body aids in the pen's ability to "clip" to things without snagging, or failing to capture the material being clipped to. It's a totally functional design element. I've never felt that the Liberty clip was uncomfortable, so I don't really see how this clip would be any different.
If you don't like the clip, well, I don't think there is any requirement that the clip be installed in these pens, you could go for a fully clip-less design, or just find a different kit that's to your liking.
Overall, I still think the Coyote kit is a good looking design. Need to put an order in soon, I will have to see how it feels when I get one in hand!