Lets turn the question around and ask what do you think of your pens???
You have seen many other pen turners showing off their pens here, how do you compare yourself to them??? Do you want to stand out from them or are you trying to duplicate what they do??? You are the only one who can answer the question. What we think is irrelevent. Shapes and profiles are in the eyes of the beholders. Finishes can not be seen with photos so do not bother to ask about that. I laugh when people do these Macro photos and think we all can see fit and finish because we have this huge picture to look at. Get real. Only if you have pen in hand can one give a fair assessment on fit and finish of anyones pens.
We as pen turners look for that WOW factor and if you are producing that in your mind then you are doing fine. By now you should be refining your techniques and should be seeing differences. How do you like what you see???