Two Fine Barons, BigNick
Beautiful Blanks, Excellent Fit and Finish.
Your Turning and Finishing is Excellent.
However IMHO, they look a little bit like me, a Tad Overweight.
My Doctor keeps telling me to reduce my bulk and waist line.
Your Pens look fine around the waist line, but they could lose some around the Girth.
I am fully aware that some people with larger hands like to have a thick pen to get their fingers around. And that is fine if that is the reason.
But the appearance of your pens would improve considerably if you turned a bit more Meat off the Blanks.
Give it a try and see what it looks like.
Congratulations,
Brian.