The picture is a little blurry and rather pixelated, so it is difficult to see the pen clearly. Two suggestions - 1) crop out the unnecessary background so the pen itself takes up more room in the picture, and 2) check the focus on the camera to make sure it's actually focusing on the pen, rather than the background.
With respect to the pen itself, from what I can see it looks pretty nice. It looks like you did a good job on the laminations. The fit looks pretty good too, though it's tough to see it exactly in the picture.