Well Done Dan,
Love the Tulip wood Pen, the Fit is Superb
My personal taste is not to have Slimlines, Pinched in the middle, they look a little like me, Overweight, and my Belt too tight.
While Pen number 1 looks good the Body could have had a closer fit to the Nose diameter.
Not withstanding, They show considerable skill, that will be further honed with more experience.
Congratulations,
Brian.