Better than my first seg.
Like they mentioned above, maybe some contrasting wood or some pick guard for contrast. Also, it can be difficult to keep the sections of segmentation even. Careful measurements can be helpful, or even critical. Especially on pens with diff size upper and lower tubes. It becomes even more complicated on something like a Euro, where you have to figure in a tendon type CB.
For a first effort, great job. Keep on it and it gets better.