John, I think the pen looks great! Don't hesitate to post. We all love to give advice because many of us learned to make pens by reading this site and want to contribute. That being said, can't see anything to improve on the pen - nice fit and very good finish, pleasing shape, great piece of wood. Even the photo is good. I like the dark look, but it could a click lighter, or maybe an additional accent light. When I first started, it was easier to make a good pen than a good photo of it, so you did well on that count also.