Very. very nice Jeff, and here's why I think so.
While I appreciate the workmanship, and I am incapable of making a watch-part pen (I have observed another member make a beautiful one and was twitching just "watching" him/her pick-up all of the parts with tweezers), here's is why I like this one:
It is not overloaded with parts
The carbon fiber adds interest, but doesn't detract from the overall composition of the parts
I like hands on the faces an like the two proportionate faces.
Just my opinion...but I am not WP guy. I wouldn't mind make and using one like that though.