Good job! I have some material similar to that, and am now really curious how it will turn out.
If I can make a suggestion, next time, try cropping the picture so that only the pen or pen and cap are presented. This will allow it to be a little bigger in the frame, and thus easier for us to see. There are also some lighting issues, but a cropped pic will really help.
Here's an example of the cropped pic, which I also lightened a touch:
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As you can see, the picture itself could then have been bigger without changing the overall size of the thread (i.e., without Anthony or Eagle having to scroll [
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