How does my home made photo tent work?

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jdmacdo

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not bad... just a couple of comments - the background color tansition was the first thing I saw, if there is a way to reduce the transition, it would give more focus to the pen. Also, the top of the clip looks a little fuzzy, I think there is more detail there that I just can't see...

Hope these commnets help...
 

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not bad... just a couple of comments - the background color tansition was the first thing I saw, if there is a way to reduce the transition, it would give more focus to the pen. Also, the top of the clip looks a little fuzzy, I think there is more detail there that I just can't see...

Hope these commnets help...

What do you mean by background color tansition? The blue too much?
 

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Since you want comments, I think you should turn your pen sideways (perpendicular)to the camera rather than straight on. Set the camera on macro, and snap a few shots!Oh and change your background color to Army green! LOL :)
 

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Rick, he may be referring to the crease or joint running horizontal in your backdrop. A smooth backdrop would not take away from your pen. Which looks good.
 

knifecut

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You need more light on the left side of the pen to avoid the shadow being cast from the right.

There shouldn't be color difference in the background. The floor of the tent having more light cast on it gives the background color a two tone look. Plus you'll want to avoid the horizontal line where the floor meets the back wall.
 
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