First Cartridge Pens

[ribanett]

After a few (????) mistakes, think I have the process down

Ok guys, tear them apart, I'll do better next time

 

[PaulDoug]

Ya, I'd say you have it down. I don't see one there I don't like. To my eye you did just the right proportions on the ones that have the three pieces of a cartridge. Great pens.

 

[desertyellow]

That is a nice bunch of pens.
I guess the pen is mightier than the sword.

 

[bitshird]

Larry, that is about as fine a group of cartridge pens that I've seen.

 

[rherrell]

I think they all look great! The only thing that jumps out at me is the serrations on the bullet.Personally I don't care for that look so when I get a bullet like that I'll seat it a little deeper to hide the lines. Keep up the good work![8D]

 

[Sylvanite]

Your pens look very nice. I don't think there's anything about them to "tear apart". Some of the proportions are not to my taste, but that's simply a matter of personal preference. Myself, I like the bit of cannelure you've left exposed on the bullets. That is where the manufacturer intended the bullets to be seated, so I think it makes the cartridges look authentic.

Good job,
Eric