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tommyd

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Here are a couple more photos what do you think?
 

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darcisowers

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Very nice kaleidescope!! I like your first photo more, because you can tell what it is easier.

as for the second photo, I'm not a fan of the vignetting/black corners in this crop. If there was more white background showing, the vignetting would probably be OK, but it doesn't work for me in this closeup.
 

jttheclockman

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I too like the first photo and I am sure it would look on the web site. You have the photo taking down. Good job.
 

ctubbs

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I agree, the first shot is much better showing what the photo is of. They are both good, sharp, well exposed photos. You have the lighting and setup down. I disagree however on the crop. For a catalog shot, background is to set off the product from the rest of the page. Now, If the background were a shot through the scope, with the device superimposed, now that is a horse of a different color entirely.

The segmenting is outstanding and the finish is very good. I like the stand for it, also.
Charles
 
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