There are 3 requirements for a SlimLine pen. Once these are met, you can do anything you want.
If the pen is for personal use, I can alter the ink refill, but if I am going to sell the pen, the ink refill should be left stock.
1.
The length of the ink refill is what determines the overall length of the assebled transmission and the bottom tube. You can us longer or shorter tubes, but the overall length will have to stay the same.
2.
You will always need some length of the upper tube to grab the trasmission for twisting. It can be a lot shorter than the stock tube, but yopu will need a tight fit over those 3 nubs that are pressed into the transmission because the fit between the nubs and the tube is what twists the transmission.
3.
And you will always need to have the hole in the cap long enough to clear the black plastic thread on the end of the ink refill.
That sort of limits the dimensions on the pen, unless you choose to shorten the ink refill; and that is not a good thing to do with a pen you will be offering for sale.
Within those restraints, there is a lot the can be done the location of the spit, how much overlap there is between the upper and lower barrels, and what you do with the clip.
If you choose to cut off the length of the ink refill, there is no limit to what you can do with the pen. You just can't sell it or give it as gift unless you are willing to sell the user modified cartridges for the life of the pen. The last time I did this, I kep preaying they would lose a pen that refused to be lost.
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