Looks like you had a good time with segmenting these Pens. Robert,
Your Joints are excellent, and your Finish looks Fine.
IMHO I cannot see the purpose of the Beads and Coves near the top of the clip on the Funline. As if the pen is slipped into a Pocket the Beads will stop the pen from sitting right down.
Also I prefer to see some symmetry with multiple segments, that is that the segments or inserts are of a similar dimension.
But these are only my opinions and likes, be assured, there are no Absolutes or Stringent rules in segmenting, it is purely a matter of taste.
I look forward to your next posting,
Brian