Looking good. On the corian pen you refer to it as "they are both done in chrome kits", you might want to have that in a singular reference. Other than the few "It is's" left I think you have something going pretty good. If it were me, I would add a thumbnail image next to the link. Not a big deal now, but when you get more pen types on there it will give a quick reference to the style that someone might be shopping for or entice them to look at something they didn't know they were looking for.