Bullet pen:
Fit: both ends look good from the pictures.
Finish: might be a little dull, but it's hard to tell. I don't see any scratches though!
Form: shape looks a little funny, just ever so slightly. Mostly near the coupler, it looks like a flat in the overall curve of the pen.
Sierra pen:
Fit: looks good by the cap, but the tip end might be a little small. This could also be a trick of the picture. If it is small, it's not by much.
Finish: very nice! You really brought the sparkle out of the blank!
Form: it matches the curve of the kit fairly closely, to me that is a hard curve to match!
Both pens look good, keep practicing!