what i can see its a very nice pen, well done. i am not the best with photography, but get rid of the background. all i can see is whiskey, and its not a single malt scotch at that LOL
Definitely need to loose the booze and the beige background as well...celebrate the pen with a color that doesn't blend into the pen and don't use distractions. I can't even comment on the pen with all that behind it, and the upper barrel is lost into the beige wall. Just set it on some white or black paper.
Thanks for the input! I'm working on a photo "jig". Maybe a simple bit of white velvet for the background. I will post more in the photography threads.