Mike - I hope you're as serious as I was about wanting even nit-picking comments. Here goes. In your navigation, "Our Pen's" should not have an apostrophe. It's neither possessive nore a contraction. The way you have the two huisache pens set up it's impossible to determine which PayPal button belongs to which pen. Also, in the description, the word smooth is misspelled. Your antler cigar pen says 124kt gold...should be 24 kt. Lava Flow in Chrome "Its $25" IS a possessive and should have an apostrophe between the t and the s. Solid surface corian pen - Designer is misspelled. Also, "both" should be "each". "Enter supporting content here" shouldn't appear on the page (at the bottom.) On the "About Us" page, the last line, the proper word would be "enjoy" rather than "enjoyed." Also the opening line should start "My wife, Nicole, and I..." On the home page, Costum should be Custom. On the blanket chest page, can you really expect to pull this off? "we can sit down together" Also, "for and additional charge" should be "an".
I hope this helps--and good luck with the site!