What I can see looks Good, Sam.
Unfortunately being in the Pen Boxes, and Dark Object on Dark Background (the pen box), doesn't give these Old Eye's much of a chance.
Try taking photographs, of the Pens, on a light Background, and as close as you can, while keeping in Focus.
Then we might have a fighting chance of providing you with some Constructive Feedback.
A suggestion, try to keep these First Pens, and refer to them in the coming weeks, months, and years, as a Gauge of your Progress.
I look forward to seeing more from you in the near future,
Brian.