My first open segmented job

[littlelion]

open segmented rollerball pen.
olive, ebony, coco bolo and bois de violette

 

[SDB777]

This is different...nice pen!

Scott

 

[wiset1]

I don't know what to say...

I like the concept and idea behind it, but this looks more like a prototype than a finished pen. I don't like giving fluff comments so this is constructive. Keep going and see where you can take this design idea.

 

[alphageek]

Very interesting. I assume you'd see the refill in the openings? So only the first picture has the refill in it??

 

[Younka]

very different, looks cool!

 

[yorkie]

What an interesting idea!

 

[Sataro]

Very different looking...but creative at the same time. Nice job!

 

[76winger]

It looks unfinished in the last photo, but the first one has an interesting shape to it.
How does it look with the cap on? Like Tim, I think you've got an interesting idea brewing and with some continued work it could be very good.