You did a nice job with it!
What I like about these is that they can be made thin, med or fatter and all look pretty good in my opinion. I like the size you chose.
I struggle a little bit with what blanks to use for these types of kits. What I consider to be nicer kits even though they aren't high end compared to many other pricing.
It's amazing how different of a feel a pen can have depending on a blank. My taste places this blank (which I've done a couple of) as more of a 'fun' blank. I think I did mine on cigars.
Keep up the good work!