My first attempt at casting

[eliasbboy]

Hello! Next to a thread introducing myself, this is my first "real" thread here.

I'd like to first thank you ALL for helping me tremendously in my attempt to start selling my pens.

I tried to do some cast pens for our family business as test. This is just a label printed on sticker paper and wrapped around the tube. The background is a weathered concrete wall (our business deals with commercial concrete repair and waterproofing) and a simple logo placed on top.

I'm not 100% happy with the artwork I made, but the process worked. I used a kit from Barry Gross' website. I made 2, and the other had 1 bubble in it that I was able to hide with the pen clip.:redface:

Any and all critiques are more than welcome. I'm eager to learn as much as I can.

Thanks again!

-Michael

 

[Curly]

That just might be the first concrete pen ever posted. First I know of anyway. Looks really good and your cast label is fitting and appropriate to the work you do. Well done.

 

[Lenny]

Did you power trowel it? :biggrin:

Great first (or any other) cast!

 

[eliasbboy]

That just might be the first concrete pen ever posted. First I know of anyway. Looks really good and your cast label is fitting and appropriate to the work you do. Well done.

Thanks so much!

 

[eliasbboy]

Did you power trowel it? :biggrin:

Great first (or any other) cast!

It actually was cast-in-place come to think of it.:biggrin:

I tried like hell to find something that looked like concrete and finally figured the hell with it. It sure couldn't hurt to try.

Only problem is my father really liked it, so now he wants to make a bunch to give out as Christmas presents. He mistakenly believes I know what I'm doing.

 

[mikespenturningz]

I just love the pocket clip. It is always good to hide something behind it! Saved me more than once that is for sure! Great job keep it up!

 

[Bowl Slinger]

Thats absolutely fabulous Michael!

 

[eliasbboy]

Thanks! I just tried my first decal tonight too. This site is either going to be the best thing for me or the worst thing. For every solution I find to a problem, I find 10 more NEW things to try!

 

[eliasbboy]

Also, I do a ton of work in photoshop and I'm more than happy to help if anyone ever needs anything. I'm not a professional but I've spent enough time working with it that I should be.

At least that's what my wife tells me...

 

[simomatra]

Well done excellent first cast

 

[CSue]

Very interesting! Cool, actually. Are you going to offer them to your customers?

For beginner in this, you've certainly done a great job.

 

[ericofpendom]

That has come out really great for your first attempt. The logo looks really good. Keep on showing your stuff.

Eric...

 

[Gilrock]

Also, I do a ton of work in photoshop and I'm more than happy to help if anyone ever needs anything. I'm not a professional but I've spent enough time working with it that I should be.

At least that's what my wife tells me...

Hey a lot of us are Photoshop experts...how do you think we get our pens to look so nice....:biggrin:

 

[frank123]

That should be one way to make your pen turning hobby tax deductible - advertising expenses and such if you give the pens to customers.

I really like the way that turned out, you could probably do this for other businesses as well and make a small business out of it as well.

 

[OOPS]

I agree with the others, the casting turned out great. If you intend to give these as corporate premiums, you might consider reducing the size of the font for your word Compass to see how that looks. When I first saw the pen, I was surprised by the size of the word, which covers the entire blank. I think that by reducing the font size, it might make for a classier look for the pen. Just my 2 cents.

 

[joefyffe]

Great Job!!!! AND thinking outside the box!

 

[Jjartwood]

Cool pen, The only way to improve it is to keep doing it until YOU are satisfied with it.
It looks good from here.
Well done
Mark

 

[eliasbboy]

I agree with the others, the casting turned out great. If you intend to give these as corporate premiums, you might consider reducing the size of the font for your word Compass to see how that looks. When I first saw the pen, I was surprised by the size of the word, which covers the entire blank. I think that by reducing the font size, it might make for a classier look for the pen. Just my 2 cents.

Excellent idea, thanks. This is precisely why I made one at a time until I got it right. It looked so much smaller in my head.


There's a joke there somewhere I'm sure...:biggrin:

 

[eliasbboy]

Also, I do a ton of work in photoshop and I'm more than happy to help if anyone ever needs anything. I'm not a professional but I've spent enough time working with it that I should be.

At least that's what my wife tells me...

Hey a lot of us are Photoshop experts...how do you think we get our pens to look so nice....:biggrin:

 

[rizaydog]

Very nice pen. Especialy for a first try. Well done.

 

[robutacion]

Well, the first thing that got my attention, was the name on the pen that you explained to be your cement business but, the pen name would also be well suited for this town that is also called "Compass" as people call it but, the real name is Mount Compass...!

I can't recall exactly where I heard of a "cement pen" but that doesn't mean a thing, there many way to skin a cat, you sure had yours.

I'm one to frequently mention, the ridiculous number of materials I've seen made into a pen and when it comes to embedding "stuff" in resin, I'm as guilty as anyone else, if not worse so, well done on your work.

I hope you remember and can repeat the process a few more times as from what you're saying, regardless if your father thinks that you know what you're doing or nor, I don't think you are going to get out of his request, that easy so, better to get back to work, huh...???

Cheers
George

 

[Gilrock]

Well I made the Photoshop comment but forgot to praise the pen. Great job casting and well done for a first thread. Someone previously commented about the size of the lettering and when I read that I thought it was a good suggestion. Maybe try making the lettering about half that size and I would probably still start the words more to the clip side of the pen but you can experiment when you lay it out. Also if you have control of that background where the darker areas are near the "C" I would experiment with flipping it around to the bottom side of the pen when you reduce the lettering to keep better contrast around the letters.

Really good job with the photographs. In fact so good I can see a hairline gap where the body meets at the bottom. Maybe it's not completely pushed together or needs a little squaring up or maybe they always look like that...I forget.

P.S. - The last photo has a white dot near the top of the first "S". You should be able to fix that with the healing brush. :wink:

 

[eliasbboy]

I feel like a broken record saying "thanks" so much, but I will. Thanks! All the advice and comments are greatly appreciated. I'm going to redo the label with the name smaller. It it quite large. I'll post updated pics as soon as I have them!

 

[Curly]

I'm the odd man out I guess. I like the big bold logo. To me it goes with the strength and permanence that concrete symbolizes.