My 1st segmented cartridge!

[USAFVET98]

This is my first segmented cartridge pen. I used 30-30 shells and a left over piece of blue swirl acrylic I had laying around.

As alway comments and critiques are greatly appreciated.

 

[jtdesigns]

Very unique. Reminds me of a lava lamp. My only critique is possibly trim down the brass a little more to show more acrylic. A bit too much brass for me but other than that....a nice pen!!

 

[maxman400]

Looks Great, for your first, excellent work.

 

[Pioneerpens]

very nice.

 

[Mrs Rojo22]

Nice!

Robin

 

[johncrane]

Very good first Brian!! it's a pocket pen,no clip.

 

[Dustygoose]

Very nice for a first, More acrylic less brass IMO