More Heart Walk Pens

[dmiller]

Some more of the Heart Walk donation pens. Any thoughts/critiques would be great.

Thanks.

Aquamarine:

Opal: (this one is too fat for my liking...first time with the Wall Street II)

Rippling Water:

*side note..photography is getting better, but still needs work.*

Thanks for looking.

 

[Brandon25]

Nice! I like the first blank the best. The lower barrel (writing end) could be a little thinner, but thats just preference.

 

[bitshird]

Getting better, I agree on the last one the lower barrel is just a bit chunky, They do need a slight bulge, and just about in the same place, just not quite as pronounced, you're turning pens right? or shooting pics for fashion mags. Keep up the good work.

 

[papaturner]

Very nice pens, good cause.

 

[toolcrazy]

Beautiful batch of pens.

 

[VisExp]

Nice batch of pens. The opal is beautiful, really goes well with the kit. As you and others have noted, some of the barrels are a fraction to fat. Form of the pen is something I find myself constantly working on. There are some folks on the forum that just seem to consistently get the fit and form of their pen just right, and their work is always good because of that.

The photos don't look bad, you might want to consider a different background. A plainer background distracts less from the pen.

 

[Ligget]

Lovely work!

 

[angelofdeath]

nice looking work for a great cause

 

[desertyellow]

That third one is especially amazing.