Great looking pen, and +1 on the writing in the background, hope it is yours!
On the photography, I would like to see a bit more depth of field for the top of the pen cap. That specular highlight there draws your eyes and leaves me thinking, it's blurry. This takes away from the pen itself.
The bottom of the clip appears to be in focus, so I would expect a very minor tweak could bring it all into focus.