Nice Pens, Ed.
When posting a Pen, could you please tell us the Kit, Blank, Finish, and any other pertinent fact you would like us to know.
That way we can refer to a particular Pen, in giving specific C & C.
I find all your Blanks are most interesting, but wouldn't have a clue as to what material they are made of.
Your Fit and Finish looks fine, though with the pens in that attitude, it is not easy to see the Fit detail, hence it is difficult to give a valued comment.
These Pens do show a lot of Promise, and I look forward to seeing your future posts.
For my personal preference some of the Pens could loose a bit of weight around the middle, they look a lot like me.
I would also suggest a less busy background, I found my eyes wanting to look at the base and walls rather than the Pens.
In all a Great Start,
Congratulations,
Brian.