Bash Beginner Feedback

[twinsen]

So I won the beginner beautiful pen contest. Now I have my sights set on the intermediate for next year.

I didn't think I would have a chance this year cause I almost never shape my pens like a traditional pen so I had planned to make a pen that looked more like a traditional pen. But my work buddy encouraged me to submit a pen that has my favorite profile even if it flopped. I did and IAP responded well. (I made my buddy a custom pen when I found out I won)

I am new to turning and pen turning but I've picked up a lot from looking at others work. I am look for feedback on what I did right and what I need to improve on.

 

[southernclay]

I'm really impressed by the balance of the whole thing, from the shaping at both sides of the centerband to the segmenting lines. It's all spot on. Great fit as well. Yours was one of several I saw when they were posted that I knew it was a much tougher contest than I expected. Well done and congrats! Post up some of the feather pens from your winnings so we can drool over and be jealous.....I mean happy for you haha.

 

[toddlajoie]

I would strongly suggest you continue to make pens that are not shaped like traditional pens!!! That is a fantastic pen, and next year the Intermeidate folks better watch out...

 

[Marko50]

Very impressive Greg! Congrats on the win!