Very nicely done. One suggestion ... the focus appears to be on the background and not to the middle of the pen. Try a much smaller F stop on the lens. The smaller the aperature the greater the depth of field. I.e., F2.0 is about wide open and F45 is really small ... and the F45 is much better all around for this type of photograph. []
I agree with the focus, I was trying to stay out of the light to avoid a shadow. Im not much on camera knowlege. I do the best I can. I will look into takeing better photographs. Thanks for the kind words.